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Open Poetry #27

sight

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-06-30 06:05 PM

sight

I surmise
I once
used pain
as a brace
but a light
lit when
things broke
and knew
I was
just waiting
for sight

"i am out of estrogen and i have a gun"

quatro
Member

since 2003-04-29

Posts 392
Galveston, Texas

1 posted 2003-06-30 06:25 PM

Wonderful write!

"I once
used pain
as a brace"

especially this thought.

quatro

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

2 posted 2003-06-30 06:27 PM

That can be easy to do I have found...

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

3 posted 2003-06-30 06:53 PM

nice

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

4 posted 2003-06-30 07:00 PM

You have the most unique style of writing here, and I really love it.

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

5 posted 2003-06-30 07:15 PM

BRAVO LADY

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-07-01 04:12 AM

Cruina
Junior Member

since 2003-07-01

Posts 16
Virginia

7 posted 2003-07-01 04:17 AM

but a light
lit when
things broke

It is true that was does not kill us will make us stronger.

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