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Dark Poetry #4

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pyre
Member

since 2008-05-16

Posts 136

0 posted 2008-05-16 01:06 PM

What I can't see becomes clear when I press
And push through the sheet of fresh blemished flesh
I find it inspiring to squeeze
And tinker with the facts
Faded behind eyes and tissues of lies
I see why Christ denies

My skin doesn't blend
With the next of kin
From a war which needs amend
The shells with a violent story
Which tells of hurried
Breats after answers and deaths with cures

Only in another world
Will the stake of truth
Puncture through
Empty and ignorant
The knowledge of
A blind falling and fallen world

Our peace will pursue
Another life through
The meat of discordance
Lifting what I don't understand
This truth will show oncordance
And the reasoning behind an Armold Paole (Paul) hand

Again
Junior Member

since 2008-05-13

Posts 47

1 posted 2008-05-17 06:13 PM

This is a really intense poem. Really good.

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

2 posted 2008-05-18 10:49 AM

Wow this is very powerful.. I like your style. Keep it up!

~Zach~

"Fate leads the willing, and drags along the reluctant."

pyre
Member

since 2008-05-16

Posts 136

3 posted 2008-06-02 12:15 PM

thank you.

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