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Open Poetry #35
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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan
0 posted 2005-03-19 06:39 AM


I'll hold the ladder
so you'll never fall;

still slender,
a figure
in pale blue jeans.

Handing me peaches
by which
to treat ourselves.

How
could young Adam
not favor Eve.
© Copyright 2005 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
J.Samm
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since 2004-01-12
Posts 415
Iloilo City, Philippines
1 posted 2005-03-19 08:17 AM

very enchanting, Huan Yi...with a very refreshing touch of youth and simplicity
Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
2 posted 2007-05-01 12:55 PM

right. how?  she sold him.


beautiful poem as always.
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