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Open Poetry #35

Chris

Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2005-03-14 11:25 PM

I watch you. . .
in your quietudes:

a deer

as moves
the silent woods,

a bird

as sings
with outstretched wings

the sky
at dusk. . .

to sleep

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2005-03-15 02:38 AM

Serenely beautiful, yet intense in its still awareness.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2005-03-15 09:32 AM

This is truly beautiful.....not just because of the title....lol...it's quiet and gorgeous. hugs, Chris

"Nunc scio quit sit amor."
~ Virgil

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

3 posted 2005-03-15 10:03 AM

A few scattered words, yet they encompass so much. You're a master of this!

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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

4 posted 2005-03-15 10:07 AM

enjoyed the feeling of this...soft, gentle

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2005-03-18 09:48 PM

very soft

Martie

Moderator

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

6 posted 2005-03-18 09:52 PM

Beautiful!

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

7 posted 2007-05-01 12:58 PM

how can you just write one after another such beautiful poems???? envy.

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