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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2005-03-07 11:11 PM

Precious Thoughts


I wish
that I
could do
better.

I wish all
of my words,
my thoughts,
my actions,
would harmonize
into love.


JamesLee
March08
2005
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ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2005-03-07 11:27 PM

Make no mistake, for certain they do.
Clearly they are inside of you.
TD
Voiceless
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2 posted 2005-03-07 11:41 PM

Me too..
Good Job!
~Jen

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3 posted 2005-03-08 04:48 AM

All the words seem to be singing in harmony to me. Great writing

Andrew
JamesMichael
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4 posted 2005-03-10 11:41 PM

Thank you This Diamond, Voiceless and Marshalzu for the nice comments...James
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