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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
My heart hung Upon a silken thread Until you snipped Its last breath of hope The scarlet bundle fell Upon a pile of ruthless debris Glass tears and broken promises From a worn- out, tragic love story Bleeding is not new for me I have bled countless times before So here I am spinning thread To hang my heart once more. |
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Soulfisher Member
since 2005-01-07
Posts 226where ever the fly fishing is good |
very nice imagery here princess. enjoyed this very much. and what area of the pils are you in? |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
must agree, very lovely imagry.... enjoyed this... |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Great writing  Andrew |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
J.Samm And the sun will make it right. Enjoyed |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jasmine~ I just adore this piece~ Fragile, touching, very touching~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very touching write |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...things of the heart can be delicate...James |
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