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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Visions seen, scenes through screens when the dark meets pale in dawn of day where I deeply breathe in, savoring peaceful moments and, like a child, free my mind plays somewhere distant so far away, morning rolls in slow through dreams and open windows. [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (08-30-2006 08:03 AM).] |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
"where I deeply breathe in, savoring peaceful moments where, like a child, free my mind plays" That's peace for me too  A peaceful read. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms gs..them darn windows always do that don't they? enjoyed it ms |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
FNG thank you for enjoying the moment this morning. Daark, I do so enjoy looking through the screen when the windows to the world are left open.  Thanks dark buddie. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Donna...Morning is my favorite time...especially those like you just described.  |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I enjoyed this, this morning Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Marte, Loper, thank you both so very much!! Hugs. |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Ah, window sounds and moths against the screen... Well done, little one. |
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Neotec Member
since 2006-08-22
Posts 112 |
nice : ) |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
your morning is also nice to read in the evening Gentle Spirit... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"somewhere distant so far away, morning rolls in slow through dreams and open windows." makes me think of the smell of rain... (that's a good thing)  I like this very much |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
just like that ..... in rolling motion picturesque!! Ct |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
"morning rolls in slow through dreams and open windows" What a beautiful thought. Nice to see you. Sandra |
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