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I Passed
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I Passed |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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I Passed Some how I passed the prism white Into the glories colored light Walking rainbows jeweled with dew Into horizons endless view With all my other senses lit To play upon a cane of wit To fix those fragile entities To stay my phantoms fantasies It was a moment of delight With endless stars that lit the night With galaxies of pinwheel new All of which came into view A wonder that implodes my mind The wonder of true white to blind The open of a door of sight An instant of beyond the light It is an instant nothing more But is a glimpse into the core |
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JosephF Junior Member
since 2006-08-30
Posts 30 |
Wow, that was Beautiful, really really Inspiring. (Claps) |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
whew, your in wonderful form this morn this was so pretty, absolutely beautiful morning Sy  |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well done! Toerag passed a kidney stone  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
I signed on early just to read you in the morning Sir Sy I was going to say you are a wonderful way to start the day but it all seems sort of anticlimactic in light of Toerag's kidney stone...  laughing... |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy there is no end only filigree of silk blooming then a melting prism encompassing of perfect quilt  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And I saw you wave... Excellent writing as always, Sy!   |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Filagree - yes that is what this was, pure filagree of thought and emotion, loved it! Here I thinking by the title you passed a kidney stone Mornin folks. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
...and so I'm pulled into your true colors. They dance smiles and misty rainbows, off these pages into sparkling reflections! Lovely prisms!  ~ K ~  |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"It is an instant nothing more But is a glimpse into the core" And never to be forgotten! Hmm? Perhaps like a kidney stone for those unfortunate enough to have experienced one. All that aside, a lovely write! |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Ah, my friend, I have never seen that light, except in your words. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Oh Seymour, this is just so beautiful. As always. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JosephF Thank you for the warm comment. LeeJ Almost as pretty as you.  Interloper Passeda few in my day, very painful. Lady Your reads ae always special to me. Martie And that is the Martie way. Sunshine You know I Mysteria You surely are one of a kind. Klassy Always a Klassy answer, thank you. Honeybunch For a lovely person. Pilgrimage LOL well that's one way. Thank you SmartChick Perhaps, but not as lovely as you. Thank you |
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